Fireworks

October 6, 2006 | Author: Cindy | Filed under: Your Daily Dose of Love

My emotions captured in a flash,
A photograph of how you make me feel,
A fireworks show blazing in mid-air,
Amazing, isn’t it, how it’ll make you stare?
One beautiful burst of color,
One look that bears a flame,
One drowning moment of loudness,
And the quietness of the rain.

The lights & sounds,
Oh how my heart pounds,
Suspended for all to see,
With what you make happen inside of me,
Every strand, unique, it’s own.
As I fall further & further,
Maybe if you’d unwind.

My emotions captured in a flash,
A fireworks show blazing in mid-air,
One beautiful burst of color,
One drowning moment of loudness,
The lights & sounds,
Suspended for all to see,
Every strand, unique, it’s own.

A photograph of how you make me feel,
Amazing, isn’t it, how it’ll make you stare?
One look that bears a flame,
And the quietness of the rain,
Oh how my heart pounds,
With what you make happen inside of me,
As I fall further & further

Submitted by Adalynn

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7 Responses to “Fireworks”

1
mahesh Says:
October 7th, 2006 at 7:04 am
it is really nice…
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shifa Says:
October 7th, 2006 at 4:38 pm
wow! really amazing………
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Adalynn Says:
October 7th, 2006 at 8:27 pm
Hey look that’s mine!!!!!!!!aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im so xcited… i’m only 15!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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amaya Says:
October 8th, 2006 at 1:51 am
nice work adalynn!!
i am loooking forward to your next piece.
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moin Says:
October 8th, 2006 at 5:48 am
just superb i like it
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SHEELA AVI Says:
October 8th, 2006 at 8:07 am
THAT WAS A TERRIFIC NUMBER BY THE AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!CAN EXPECT SOME MORE THUNDEROUS STUFF FROM HIM SOON

WELL THIS IS WHAT I WANTED TO TELL MY LOVE AVI…MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM WHAT I FELT WHEN EVER I THINK ABOUT HIM…..IT RAINS WITHIN….I CAN SEE A SUNSHINE IN MY EYES AND MY WHOLE BODY IS WRAPPED UP WITH THE MOONLIGHT WHICH FALLS FROM HIS LOOKS…..I LOVE HIM LIKE ALL THE FOUR SEASONS..AND SPRING OFCOURSE IS THE BEST SEASON FOR BOTH OF US…… NEW IDEAS AND PLANS SPRING UP IN US…..
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Gabriel Dandzo Says:
October 10th, 2006 at 8:43 am
This poem is very inspirational and touching. It really brought the spark into my love life…….