Love Coma
July 9, 2006 | Author: Cindy | Filed under: Love Stories
Fun and harmless night
Took a turn for the worst
Chaos, traffic lights
Turned into a fight for life
Frantically trying to think fast
To put the pedal on the gas
Trying to stop what he saw coming
To keep their hearts alive and drumming
A truck slid past, it all went by so fast
Car crash
Before that moment, his girl was so happy
With the wind in her hair
In the world, not a care
Except for him of course
An end was put to that night
She shivered in fright
She had never been so scared in her life
Sirens in the distance
Parametics in sight
She kissed him on the cheek
And cried as she looked at him..
All the life sucked out of him
She was overcome and weak
After that night she`d never take anything for granted
Ever again
Spend every moment with him she can
She sobbed on her friends shoulder
As the time passed by
She got by with only scrapes
But felt as if she were hit by a boulder
She`d give her life for his
Just to know he`d live
All out of tears
And overcome by fear
As the nurse with the blue jacket, called her in
She saw him
In an awful coma
Just lying there, wrapped in tubes and on machines
She wishes it was all a dream
The nurse tells her, it`s a slim chance he will survive
She screams and insist it`s all a lie
Tightening her grip to his bedside
She began talking and talking
Even though theres no saying, if he could hear
Holding on to her pink trimmed stockings
Hoping for a miracle to appear
She sat there, pouring her heart out to him
Telling him what they`d do if he lived
They`d buy the biggest house by the shore
Not only three but four floors
With a pool so large you could swear you`re in the sea
She never gave up hope and got down on her knee
She weeped while she told him she loved him more than life itself
This night was such a living hell
She told his unconcious self, “if you love me, if you`re there, squeeze my hand”
After 5 long minutes that seemed like forever
This was a moment that no one could understand
He practically cut off her circulation with that love-binding squeeze
Her voice was keeping him alive
He opened his eyes
As the life filled back into his body
Strong and true
He whispered, “I`m not going anywhere, as long as I have you.”
Submitted by Stephanie Ryan – moi.
This one made me tear up.
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